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Sea of Rebirth Ch. 1 redone

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Sea of Rebirth Chapter 1. (redone)</u>

It was a bright day in Konoha. If you where to look into one particular training ground you would have spotted two young ninjas sitting by 3 logs imbedded in the ground, one with bright pink hair and the other with jet black hair.

“Sasuke-kun where are they?” Sakura said turning to he crush “Sure, Kakashi-sensei is always late but Naruto?”

Sasuke just shrugged, “what does it matter if that blond fool is here or not. It’s not like-”

“SASUKE!” a loud voice blasted from the distance.

Sasuke just sighed. “Well speak of the dobe.” He said, turning to the origin of the voice. “What is it now Naruto, Do we have to sit through another wannabe-Hokage speech–?”

“Shut up.” Naruto growled. “Why did you tell everyone you defeated Haku alone?”

“Because that’s what happened. Sure you tried to help but you only succeeded in almost getting us both killed, if I hadn’t killed that ice freak.”

“STOP IT.” Naruto shouted. “First, how dare you take all the credit for the mission? We both fought off Haku and Zabuza. Second, we don’t know if Haku died or not; we never found the body and finally don’t call her an ice freak she was just someone with a rough life.”

“Whatever. Like anyone would believe you could ever do something useful.” Sasuke said in a proud demeanour.

“Sakura can you really believe this guy?” Naruto said pleading to her.

“Naruto, will you stop bothering Sasuke. We all know what happened there and how much of an annoyance you where.” She spat at Naruto.

“But…But…” Naruto stuttered.

“Look Naruto, Kakashi should be here soon and then we will start my Sharingan training. So you can just go off and do…whatever.” Sasuke said with closed eyes

Naruto looked back and forth from one team-mate to the other trying to get some ounce of sympathy from either. But it never came. Instead Sakura just sighed, “Look Naruto, last mission showed us that we are all not as powerful as we thought. If it wasn’t for Sasuke we would have died there. So we need to do are best to get more powerful. So you should stop talking nonsense and try to get some training.”

Naruto clenched his fist. “Fine, forget both of you.” He said in a low growl, “I never felt much like part of a team here anyway. I’ll just go train alone.” He turned and started to walk away. “It’s not like it the first time.”
When he was finally out of view Sasuke just scoffed, “what a baby, ow well not like he ever did anything important.”

“SASUKE, SAKURA!”

They both turned around to see there late sensei. Even though most of his face was covered up they could both feel the anger radiating off him.

“S-S-sensei!” Sakura stuttered, “H-how long have you been there?”

“Long enough you two.” He said with obvious fury. The two young ninjas were at a loss for words. “So let me get this straight. Sasuke, you decided to take all the credit for the last mission and leave out any positive involvement by your team-mates, and further incriminate a person who you never really knew or understood. All to increase the so-called pride of the Uchiha?” Sasuke just turned and scowled. Then Kakashi turned to his other student. “And you Haruno (note the impoliteness, no suffix), instead of sticking up for your friend and team-mate, decide to mindlessly follow your crush to the point of breaking down the very dynamics that this team was built on. So did I get that right, you two?!”

Neither spoke. They couldn’t even look there teacher in the eyes (or eye). A few moments passed when Kakashi finally hissed icily, “We will talk about this later. Now I need to find Naruto and take him to the Hokage.”

“But what about my Sharingan training?” Sasuke pleaded. This caused Kakashi to divert his full fury at the boy. The atmosphere was horrible. It was heavy with Kakashi’s well-earned killing intent, pissed-off mood and crackling with his lightning chakra. Like in that first fight with Zabuza, Sasuke was reminded that Hatake Kakashi was in fact an elite Jo-nin.

“Sasuke, before you learn any special moves from me you will need to prove to me you deserve them. If it were up to me I would seal those eyes right now. NOW GET OUT OF MY SIGHT.” And then he was gone but not in a spiral of leaves like normal but by a loud crash of white lightning.

Sakura stared in disbelieve at the spot her sensei had occupied earlier and remembered a history lesson by Iruka-sensei. “The Shiroi Kaminari Shunshin [White Thunder Body Flicker]… The Hatake’s personal shunshin tech.”

Sasuke fixated her out of the corner of his eyes. “What the hell?”
“Iruka-sensei said something about it in history class that the Hatake clan descended upon their foes like Susanoo from a bolt of lighting. They were feared as hunters and hired usually for revenge, before the formation of Hidden Ninja Villages.”

“Humph.” He scoffed, “I don't think they could beat Uchiha.”

"Umm Sasuke...The Uchiha's used this tech. for the basics of there Ka-ton Shunshin [Fire release Body flicker]. It’s in all the textbooks about the foundation of Konoha. They were the »White Thunder Ghosts«.”

Sasuke just gave another “humph” and walked off, totally ignoring the calls from the pink haired girl.

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Damn Sasuke

Bam

Damn Sakura

Bam

Damn village

BOOM

The log that Naruto had been hitting for the last half hour had finally broke and shattered into bits, leaving a panting Naruto.

“You know, as much as I’m sure this is good for your training, I don’t think I can keep the Hokage waiting much longer Naruto.” remarked the masked ninja behind him.

Naruto turned to face his teacher, allowing Kakashi to see that both his eyes had a red tint to them. “How long have you been there, and why should I give a damn?” the enraged blonde yelled.

“Well I got her a while ago, but decided that you needed to let off some steam; so I let you continue with the pummelling of a defenceless hunk of wood.” Kakashi answered, jumping down and landing a few feet from the boy.

Naruto just stared at his teacher. “What is he going to tell me how bad I am at being a ninja too?” he said looking him straight in the eye, “Or maybe how I should be more supportive of the great Uchiha, who needs so much help with that giant stick up his ass.”

Kakashi just chuckled, his chakrae calming down. “Well that sounds just like Sasuke.” But then he reverted to a serious face. “But no, I am not here to do any of those things, in fact it because of you exceptional skill as a ninja that the Hokage wants to see you now.”

Naruto was not convinced, though his eyes did revert to their normal colour. “If that’s true then why did they send you. I would have thought they would want you training Sasuke on his stupid Sharingan.”

Kakashi just walked up to his student while speaking. “Well you should know that Sasuke will not be receiving any special training from me for a while until he gets rid of that attitude of his. Also they sent me because it involves your position on my team… and since you don’t want to make this easy we will have to do it the hard way…” he finished right before giving Naruto a quick chop to the neck, knocking him out cold.

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“Package delivery, Hokage-sama.” Kakashi unceremoniously dropped his student in front of his leader's desk.

The village leader just looked at the boy. “Kakashi, I said to bring him here not capture him like a nuke-nin.”

“Well if he is anything like his mother that might have been his only choice,” Said a man standing next to the Hokage.

“Don’t worry I’ll get him up.” Kakashi replied as he headed towards the boy and then he shook him awake. “I’ll treat you to Ramen if you wake up now, Naruto!”

He bolted up with a hungry look in his eyes, causing all three to laugh. “Ow ya, he is definitely their son.” remarked the unknown man.

“W-w-what’s going on here?” Naruto stammered, bewildered from head to toe.

“Well we hade some things to talk to you about, Naruto.” Said the elderly man “but first I thing there is someone you should meet.” He gave a gesture to the man standing near him.

“Hello there, Naruto ,I am your uncle Takeo. Now I’m sure you have al lot fo-” Takeo never got to finish his sentence, because a fist belonging to a very angry blond ninja just collided with his face.
Well the wait if finally over, I just hope it was worth it.

So here it is the redone first chapter of Sea of Rebirth. I must say thanks to Meje and Kamikashi for helping me throught this one.

So please tell me what you think of the new version to the opening and for those who dont know about this fic it is a AU and there will be some OC in it

and one more thing. The part about Haku will be answered later so please dont ask me about it
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YES! Now this looks like it's going to be awesome!